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Monday, July 15, 2013

Casey's Movie Rewrites- Dirty Dancing (Part 2)

A Dirty Dancing Spanking- Part 2



The conclusion to A Dirty Dancing Spanking. If you missed the first one, you can find it here.

     What the hell did he think he was doing? Baby struggled against Johnny's grip as he peppered her panty clad bottom with stinging smacks. He had pushed her flowy skirt up over her back and she could feel the cool air kiss the backs of her thighs, making the fire he was setting on her backside seem all the hotter.
     “Stop!” she yelled out. He kept up his pace, as if he didn't even hear her. Baby's breathing became frantic, she felt trapped and powerless. She couldn't struggle enough to break free and Johnny wasn't listening to her protests. Just when she thought she might lose it, the fear completely taking over her body, he stopped. His spanks became caresses, rubbing the spots he had just punished. Baby found herself relaxing into him, settling down across his lap. Then she remembered that he was a jerk.
     “What the hell was that?” She fought to keep her voice from shaking. She started to push herself up, but Johnny held her down with a hand on her upper back.
     “Stay right where you are,” he commanded. His other hand continued to stroke her warm cheeks, occasionally kneading and squeezing them. Baby squeezed her eyes shut as she felt her core grow hot and wet. How could she possibly be enjoying this? All the more reason to strengthen her resolve and stay away from this man, he made her body respond in ways she just didn't understand.
     “Will you at least tell me what's going on?” she asked.
     “I'm spanking you. Haven't you ever had a spanking before?” She could hear the amusement in his voice.
     “No,” she answered and tried to swing her leg up to kick him, but he had her pinned between his legs so she didn't have a great range of motion.
     “Why am I not surprised by that?” He sounded more like he was talking to himself rather than her and this time he couldn't keep the laughter out of his voice.
     “Let me up,” she started struggling against him again.
     “Will you remember to let me lead?” Johnny punctuated his question with a hard smack and she let out a yelp. “Will you stop acting like such a brat?” His hand came down again and she fisted the sheets on the bed.
     “No! Yes?” Her mind was swirling. She still wasn't over the shock that he was spanking her, and it hurt! But at the same time she liked having his hands on her and when he had paused to rub her bottom it made her feel so cherished.
     Johnny chuckled at her indecisive answer. “You're still not listening to what I'm saying.” He hooked his fingers in the elastic of her panties and slid them down to her thighs.
     “Ahh,” Baby said. Letting out sounds of protest as she threw her hand back to cover her now naked ass. He caught her hand in his and pinned it to her lower back, causing her to feel further trapped.
     “Please,” she squeaked out as his hand came down on her bare skin. She wouldn't have thought that her thin underwear had been serving as much protection from his swats, but the sensation was completely different on her nakedness. Resigned to the fact that Johnny wasn't going to let her up until he felt he was finished, she tried to remain in place, only wiggling around when he spanked the same spot more than twice in a row.
     She thought for sure he was never going to stop, but then he slowed down his rhythm. He was using the same intensity, but now he was pausing in between spanks to rub her heated cheeks. She reveled in the feeling and started letting out little moans as he rubbed.
     “I'm sorry,” she said. She felt his hand in her hair and he tugged it slightly to the side so she would turn her face towards him. “I'm sorry if you felt like I wasn't listening.”
     Johnny gently pulled her up from her position and she moved to stand, but he brought her right back down to sitting on his thigh. “Come here,” he said, wrapping an arm around her waist and pulling her in close to him. He brought his mouth down to hers, kissing her with a passion and intensity that she wasn't expecting. He broke away and looked at her.
     “Will you start listening to me now?” His possessive grip on her and his stern look were enough to make her knees turn to jelly. She nodded her head in agreement.
     “And will you stop yelling at me?” Johnny asked.
     “You yelled first,” she pointed out, her tone coming out a little more snappish than she meant it to. At his answering glare she shifted her bottom against his leg and the sting reminded her that she wasn't in the ideal position to argue.
     “Fine, can we agree we were both out of line?” His expression softened a bit. She shrugged her shoulders, not about to agree to any wrong doing when he just spanked her against her will. Even though it wasn't an entirely unenjoyable experience, she still wasn't admitting she was wrong.
     “I admit I was frustrated when I felt like you weren't listening,” he said, then he kissed her just below her ear and whispered, “I'm sorry.”
     “For spanking me?” She pulled back so she could look at him.
     “No,” he said as he shook his head and laughed, “you needed that. I'm sorry for yelling.”
     “I'm not,” she said.
     “You're not?” He questioned and raised his eyebrows at her.
     “Nope,” Baby answered, “if you yell at me, I'm going to yell back.”
     “Really?” Johnny shifted her back a little bit so he could slip a hand under her chastened bottom. She let out a whimper when he squeezed.
     She tried to push his arm away but he didn't let go. “It's not fair that you'd spank me because you're angry I yelled. You yelled too, so I should spank you now.” She crossed her arms across her chest and stuck her chin out. Trying her best to look proud, even while this man was holding her well- spanked ass in his hand.
     “You're adorable when you're trying to make an argument out of nothing.” He leaned in and kissed the tip of her nose. “And I didn't spank you because you yelled at me, I was just suggesting that maybe we should both try to stop yelling at each other.”
     She rolled her eyes at him, “Well then why the hell did you spank me? What are you mad at me about?”
     “I told you, you needed it,” Johnny said, “you couldn't get out of your own head. You just needed to refocus and recenter yourself. I just helped a little bit. Do you feel better?”
     Baby stopped to think, he spanked her to make her feel better? That made absolutely no sense to her. But before where she had felt nervous and stressed out over trying to remember the routine and the steps, she felt much calmer, her thinking more aligned.
     She looked up at him in surprise. “So you're not mad at me?”
He shook his head, “You'll know when I'm mad.” He smiled at her, “That was nothing.”
     Baby opened her mouth in shock. “What do you mean 'I'll know when you're mad'? You aren't ever doing that again.”
     “I'm not?” He was mocking her with his question, but she shook her head no. “Hmm, I think I probably will.”
     Before she had a chance to fight him, he had her flipped back over his knee, pinned in the same position she was in earlier.
     “And if I'm really upset with you, it will probably feel more like this.” Johnny brought his hand down harder than any of the spanks he had given her before. It took her breath away and she jumped at the connection. He brought his hand down again, just as hard, on her other cheek. If she had thought the first spanking was hard this quickly brought it into perspective.
     “Please, don't,” she pleaded. He rubbed his hand across the sting he had just laid down. Her face flushed when she felt his hand slip between her legs, discovering her secret wetness.
     “I don't think you hated it as much as you say,” he said.
     She froze, not knowing what to say. What kind of a freak was she that this turned her on?
     Johnny lifted her and laid her down on the bed, bringing himself down on top of her.
     “What have I done to you?” he asked as he trailed kisses down her neck.
     Baby let out a sigh. “I think you've corrupted me in all the best possible ways.”

Hope you enjoyed my little fantasy scene. Any suggestions for the movie I should add a spanking to next month? I have a few in mind, but I'd love to hear what you guys think!

Monday, July 1, 2013

Casey's Movie Rewrites- Dirty Dancing

A Dirty Dancing Spanking- Part 1



     I've decided to start a series of installments. I am a huge movie buff, I watch a lot of movies, I like a lot of movies, I fantasize my own scenes into movies. Being a spanko, most of the time I find myself inserting spanking scenes into movies that don't contain them (which is almost every movie). Really, not just movies, TV shows, books, whatever happens to be rattling around in my head. I hope you enjoy!

      Dirty Dancing an American Classic! Right? Okay, maybe not a classic exactly. But definitely a movie I have seen about a zillion times, own on DVD, and cannot help but switch it on if it happens to be on TV.
     It came out in 1987, but it is set in 1963 (and everybody is dressed like it is 1987- but we'll pretend not to notice), in the Catskills at the Summer Resort Kellerman's. We're introduced to Baby Houseman, she's vacationing with her well-to-do family, including her annoying sister. She's obviously the smart one because she is reading a book in the car while her sister fixes her hair in a mirror (Such subtleties!). Baby is entering college in the fall and then she's joining the peace corps. She's going to save the world and she is the apple of her father's eye.
     Then Johnny Castle enters the scene (seriously, greatest character name). He's the dance instructor at Kellerman's. But this job is so obviously beneath him, he just needs the money, he is way too cool for this place and these people. He is from the complete opposite side of the tracks from Baby and he is immediately unimpressed and put off by her family's money and her sheltered life.
     Of course Baby is enamored with him at first sight, and of course he is a jerk to her and won't give her the time of day. And then he needs her help, or his job and his fellow dance teacher's job will be in jeopardy. So they need to learn to work together and trust each other, and against all odds they fall in love! It's so comfortably predictable, and saccharine sweet that you can't help but love it.
     But, am I the only spanko out there who was just rooting for Johnny to flip Baby over his knee and spank her self righteous ass? I can't be. You don't have to admit it, I'll do it for you. So without further ado, here is my added scene.

     Baby let out a frustrated groan. She was tired, her feet hurt, and she was so hot. An hour ago she was still worried about how she looked in front of Johnny. She could see herself in the mirrors that lined the wall, a disheveled, sweaty mess. But she was beyond the point of caring now. She just wanted him to stop barking orders at her, but her feet wouldn't cooperate with what her head was telling them to do.
     “Let's go.” Johnny snapped his fingers at her. “We'll run through it again, try to keep up this time.”
     Did he just snap his fingers at her? Her frustration quickly grew into a boiling rage. Johnny roughly grabbed her arm and pulled her back into the center of the floor. Baby wriggled out of his grip and took a step back from him.
     “Stop pulling me,” she shouted at him, “and stop yelling directions at me. It's not helping.”
     “Well maybe you should try focusing,” he countered, crossing his arms over his chest, “I don't think you've listened to anything I've told you.”
     Baby crossed her arms as well, matching his stance, she glared back at him and said, “You're an awful teacher. Where did you learn that yelling at your students was a good motivational tactic?”
     “Oh, I'm sure you'd be a better teacher than me.” He took a step closer to her. “Do you criticize the way everyone does their jobs, or just me?”
     She rolled her eyes at him in response.
     “Fine.” Johnny spun on his heel and crossed over to the record player. He lifted the needle and put the record back in it's sleeve. “Rehearsal is over. I'll see you tomorrow.”
     Baby stared back at him. “But we have to perform tomorrow and I still don't know all the steps.”
    Johnny continued shuffling through the records, leaving his back to her as if he hadn't heard her.
     “Johnny,” she started, but stopped when she realized he was going to continue to ignore her. “Johnny!” she yelled and stomped her foot at the same time for emphasis.
     He turned around and looked at her with a raised brow, “Now who's the one yelling?”
     “Did you hear what I said? I don't know the steps. How can you say we're done practicing?” Her words were coming out in rapid succession and she felt like she was on the brink of tears. A minute ago she had been wishing for rehearsal to end, but now she was freaking out that she didn't know what she was doing.
     He dropped the records he was holding back onto the stack and walked towards her. She thought he was coming over to comfort her and was caught by surprise when he continued walking right past her, catching her wrist as he went by. Now he was leading her across the floor towards the door. Baby was too surprised to say anything in response.
     Johnny pulled her outside, the door slamming shut behind them. She was struggling to keep up with him, but had no choice as he had her wrist trapped in a vise-like grip. Her feet were dragging in the rain soaked earth and she tried to tug her arm back to slow him down a little.
     Her attempt to slow him down seemed to quicken his pace. She was stumbling behind him as he lead her along a tree lined path.
     “Where are we going?” Her voice was shaky, her words coming out between gasps for air. Johnny stopped short in front of her and Baby put her free hand up in front of her to stop herself from bumping into him.
     He turned and looked at her, like he just realized she was trailing behind him. He dropped her wrist from his grasp and place his hands lightly on her shoulders, looking into her eyes.
     “You already know all the steps, right?” Johnny asked. She started shaking her head no. She didn't know the dance, this is what she had been telling him just minutes ago in the studio.
     “Stop.” He cut off her protests. “Close your eyes.”
     Baby looked back at him in confusion. Why did he want her to close her eyes? He still hadn't told her what they were doing. She was going to question him again, but the look he was giving her made her think twice about protesting.
     Johnny left his hands on her shoulders and she could feel the warmth from them travel throughout her body. Sometimes she could find him so stubborn and maddening, he would argue with her about everything. But other times, like this, he was so gentle. She just wanted to melt into his arms. It was like dealing with two different people.
     As her eyes were closed he started talking her through the steps and she could visual them in her head. Baby realized she did know all the steps, she just couldn't make her feet cooperate. As Johnny came to the end of the dance, she opened her eyes.
     “Did you remember them all?” he asked.
     She shook her head yes and opened her mouth to ask how any of this was helping, when he brought his hand up to her lips.
     “Stop asking so many questions.” He told her, and turned to continue up the path. This time he took her hand gently in his, instead of dragging her behind him, he walked at a slower pace so she could keep up.
     They made their way up to his private cabin which was set off in a secluded area on the outskirts of the resort.
     Baby felt a rush of heat as she remembered the last time she was here alone with Johnny. It had been a few days ago. They were rehearsing and snapping at each other, much like they had been today. He suggested a change of scenery which lead them off the resort. They had spent hours practicing balancing on a fallen log and then attempting to do the lift in a lake. They ended up back at Johnny's cabin and she thought things had changed between them because she had given herself up to him. Her own actions had surprised her, sleeping with a man she had just met. Baby loved him and she thought he loved her back, but the next day he was back to his grumpy self. She wondered if he regretted having slept with her. 
     Now here they were again. Was he planning on taking her to bed every time they had a fight during rehearsal? She knew she should fight him on this if it was his plan, but a part of her didn't want to. She was angry that he could have this kind of effect on her. Her sister Lisa was the easy one, she was supposed to be the one who was firmly entrenched in her feminist ideals. But Johnny seemed to make all of her ideals and rational thinking fall by the wayside. She knew she was in trouble, but she was finding it hard to care anymore.
     They walked into the cabin. Johnny dropped her hand as they entered and hurriedly moved around throwing some dirty clothes into a pile in the corner. Baby stood awkwardly in the doorway, twisting her skirt in her hands. She still wasn't sure what his intentions were and he was making her nervous.
     “So you can remember all the steps?” He stood across the room and suddenly focused all his attention on her, making her feel small under his gaze. She shook her head yes in response to his question. “Then why can't you execute them?”
     He seemed to honestly want to know what she thought. He wasn't snapping at her like he had been back in the studio. But she didn't know the answer. If she knew why she couldn't execute the steps then it would have been easier to fix the problem. She shrugged her shoulders.
     “Tell me.” He prompted her.
     “I really don't know,” she started, “I'm sorry if you think I'm wasting your time-”
     Johnny raised his hand and cut off her words. “You think too much,” he said, in a matter of fact way.
     “Excuse me?” Baby felt like she should be offended by his observation, but she also knew she had a tendency to over think things.
     “You're thinking too much about it,” he said as he came closer to her, “you need to let the music take over.” He was in front of her now and placed his hands on her hips. “You also have to let me lead.”
     “I am,” she snapped at him. At least she was trying to let him lead, it didn't always work out that way.
     He just looked back at her and raised his eyebrows. They both knew the truth, but it was hard for her to let someone else take over.
     “If you would just let me lead,” he began again, “and let yourself listen to the music, the steps would come more naturally.”
     “How do I make myself do that?” She couldn't help the petulant sound in her voice, and she knew she had a scowl on her face.
     “There you go, over thinking things again.” Johnny dropped his hands from her hips and lead her over towards the bed with him.
     Baby took a deep breath to stop herself from shaking. She had slept with him once and now he expected to have her in his bed whenever he wanted.       She should be more upset by this thought than she was, she'd think more about that later.
     Johnny sat on the edge of the bed and drew her closer to him. His arms were around her waist as she stood before him.
     “We weren't getting anywhere snapping at each other during rehearsal,” he said. She nodded her head in agreement. “I want you to think less about what you're supposed to be doing, and just trust me to lead you through it.”
     Baby could vaguely register his words over the pounding of the blood pumping through her veins. Her body was peaked in anticipation. Ever since they had slept together she couldn't think of anything else, and here she was again.
     Johnny grabbed her forearm and pulled her face down across his lap. She tried to push herself up, confused by what he was doing. He easily held her in place and adjusted her. Her feet remained on the floor, her upper body leaning on the bed, he angled her bottom up in the air. She was about to yell out when it finally dawned on her his intentions. But the sharp slap to her ass made the words die on her lips.

Come back for Part 2 on 7/15!